Q) The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The island hasn\'t buildings before the facilities are built.

>> In the past, the island had no buildings when the facilities were developed.

After the constructions, there are many things in this island.

>> After the constructions, many things have changed in this island.

There is a Reception building in the cetre of the island and the Vehicle track surround it.

>> There is a Reception building in the center of the island surrounded by the Vehicle track.

Tracks have two brunches of it, one is the north place and the another is south one.

>> The tracks have two directions which are going to the north and south.

Following north side of the track, you can see the Restaurant and this is the only place to eat some food in this island.

>> In the northern part of the track, you can see the Restaurant and this is the only place to eat some foods in this island.

Along the down side\'s track, you can find the Pier where you can enjoy the ocean entertainment.

>> In the southern part, you can find the Pier where you can enjoy entertainment by the ocean.
 Both sides of the reception, the west and the east, many accommodations are in there.

>>  In the western and eastern part, many accommodations are found there.

Accommodations of the west side are surrounded by palm trees, however the other side\'s rooms are beside each other around by circling footpath.

>> Accommodations on the western side are surrounded by palm trees, while the rooms on the opposite side which are also around the circling footpath are just beside each other .
If tourist wants to see the Beach which placed at the end of the west side, they could walk along the west accommodation\'s footpath.

>> CORRECT

You can also swim in there.

>> You can also swim there.