Q> >What is your favorite website and why?
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I like the Youtube.
In Youtube anyone who want to make contents can do it. So we can view various contents like cooking, traveling, styling ...
And Contents of video are natural and interesting.  Sometimes I cannot stop watching Youtube. If I can control watching well, it is good window of communication.
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Hi there Ji [이름]!
Thank you for answering!
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I like the Youtube.
>>I like using YouTube.
In Youtube anyone who want to make contents can do it.
>>In YouTube, anyone who wants to make contents can do it.
So we can view various contents like cooking, traveling, styling ...
>>We can view various contents like cooking, traveling and styling.
And Contents of video are natural and interesting. 
>>The contents of the video are natural and interesting.
Sometimes I cannot stop watching YouTube.
>>CORRECT
If I can control watching well, it is good window of communication.
>>If I can control watching it, it is good window of communication.
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