Q : What quality do you have and how could it helpful for a cabin crew at Singapore airline?
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Q : What quality do you have and how could it helpful for a cabin crew at Singapore airline?
A : I am person who can make my customer satisfied with my culture understanding skill.
When I worked at Italian restaurant, there was a patron who came from Islamic country. He was very careful in his choice of menu. So everytime I helped him choose the menu without meats, porks and crabs. And also when his menu came up, I checked again to make sure it wasn\'t included. He liked my careful service, so he looked for me in his every visit.
Singapore airline is a worldwide best company used by people all over the world. I believe the culture understanding skill I have would be suitable for roles of cabin crew in your airline.
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Hello Mia!
Your answer was already very good. I just added a few words that I thought would make the essay sound more formal and professional. Let me know what you think during our class later. We can still make some changes if you want. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I\'m a person who can satisfy customers with my ability to understand their individual cultures.
2. When I worked at Italian restaurant, there was a patron who came from Islamic country. He was very careful in his choice of menu.
2. When I worked at Italian restaurant, there was a patron who came from Islamic country. He was very careful in his choice of menu.
>>When I worked at an Italian restaurant, there was a patron who came from an Islamic country. He was very careful in his choice of menu.
3. So everytime I helped him choose the menu without meats, porks and crabs.
>>So, I helped him choose dishes from the menu that doesn\'t contain meat, pork, and crabs.
4. And also when his menu came up, I checked again to make sure it wasn\'t included.
>>Also, when his order came up, I checked again to make sure those ingredients weren\'t included.
5. He liked my careful service, so he looked for me in his every visit.
>>He liked my careful service so he looked for me every time he visited the restaurant.
6. Singapore airline is a worldwide best company used by people all over the world.
6. Singapore airline is a worldwide best company used by people all over the world.
>>Singapore airlines is world-leading company whose services are used by people all over the world.
7. I believe the culture understanding skill I have would be suitable for roles of cabin crew in your airline.
>>I truly believe that my ability to understand and cater to different cultures would suit the roles of a cabin crew member in your airline.
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