Q. What would be the best way to end bullying in schools?

2014-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I think the best way to end bullying in schools is to continuously educate students what bullying is and what kind of people bullies are. There are many cases the bullies don't know they are bullying others. They say they are just trying to be funny and think it’s not that serious even though it was actually serious. Therefore teachers should help students know about a bully and bullying. Also teachers ask students to tell if they have seen or known friends who are bullied. Teachers should ask the students who are bullied as well to inform of the situation or to say stop to the bully. If the children who are bullied handle the situation timidly, anybody can’t help them. It will never stop.

강사 첨삭

If I were to educate students about bullying I will them this: Treat others the way you want to be treated. That's the Golden Rule and it should be followed in every aspect of your life. If someone was in a position to stop you from being bullied and did nothing, how would you feel? If you find that unacceptable, you must do everything you can to stop others from hurting people. Well, I think this is a good idea for them to realize that it does not bring goodness in life. When the victims see no way out, they may choose to tragically end their life, leaving more hurt behind for those who were unable to stop it. Well, we don\'t want this to happen. I just hope that the problem will stop very near. -Teacher Chloe I think the best way to end bullying in schools is to continuously educate students what bullying is and what kind of people bullies are. >>Correct! There are many cases the bullies don\'t know they are bullying others. >>There are many cases that bullies are not aware that they bully others. They say they are just trying to be funny and think its not that serious even though it was actually serious. >>They say that they are just having fun out of others and nothing is serious without even realizing that what they do is really serious. Therefore teachers should help students know about a bully and bullying. >>Therefore, teachers should educate students about bullying. Also teachers ask students to tell if they have seen or known friends who are bullied. >>Also, teachers should have a discussion with students about bullying. Teachers should ask the students who are bullied as well to inform of the situation or to say stop to the bully. >>Teachers should also educate the students how to stop bullying and what they can do about it. If the children who are bullied handle the situation timidly, anybody cant help them. >>There are students who are bullied and helpless. It will never stop. >>Correct!

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