Q: you could live anywhere else, where would that be?

2025-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Wela

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teacher Jhozel gave me a homework and the Question is \"you could live anywhere else, where would that be?\" so I thought about where I want to live and why. I want to live in the Jeju island where is the biggest island in Korea. First reason is a life far from the city. I always dream of living close to nature, but I feel afraid to live in rural because I’ve live my entire life in the city. Jeju is far from the city but easier to live because Jeju offers various amenities for residents and tourists. second reason is plants. Jeju is located the southernmost of Korea so it’s the warmest place in Korea Therefore Jeju is the perfect place to grow various and exotic plants. For me, it feel like heaven because I love plants. Last reason is Jeju has a lot of stylish vintage market and high quality coffee roaster shop! I really love vintage shopping and tasting good coffee While I write down the reason, I realize that I truly love Jeju island and really want to live there..

강사 첨삭

Hi! I really enjoyed reading your answer, it clearly shows your love for Jeju Island! I like how you explained your reasons in a very personal way, especially your passion for plants and your appreciation for nature. I agree with you that Jeju is the perfect balance between city life and peaceful living. Your idea about vintage markets and coffee shops also adds a charming touch, it makes Jeju sound even more inviting! You expressed your thoughts sincerely, and that made your writing engaging and believable. I think you’d really enjoy living there one day! 

-Teacher Wela 

teacher Jhozel gave me a homework and the Question is \"you could live anywhere else, where would that be?

>> My teacher, Jhozel, gave me a homework assignment with the question, \"If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?

I want to live in the Jeju island where is the biggest island in Korea.

>> I would love to live on Jeju Island, which is the largest island in Korea.

First reason is a life far from the city.

>> The first reason is that I want a life far from the city.

I feel afraid to live in rural because I’ve live my entire life in the city.

>> I’ve been a bit afraid to move to a rural area because I’ve lived my entire life in the city.

Jeju is far from the city but easier to live because Jeju offers various amenities

>> Jeju is far from the city but still convenient because it offers many amenities.

second reason is plants.

>> The second reason is my love for plants.

Jeju is located the southernmost of Korea so it’s the warmest place in Korea

>> Jeju is located in the southernmost part of Korea, so it’s the warmest place in the country.

Last reason is Jeju has a lot of stylish vintage market and high quality coffee roaster shop!

>> Lastly, Jeju has many stylish vintage markets and high-quality coffee roasters!

While I write down the reason, I realize that I truly love Jeju island and really want to live there..

>> While writing this, I realized how much I truly love Jeju Island, I really want to live there someday!


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