Q10. Propose a solution

2014-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon~, Ms. [Name]. This is [이름], the manager of ABC hotel. I understand your situation. You’re saying that two small beds are not enough for 2 adults and 4 kids to sleep at night. In addition, your husband needs a good night’s rest because of the marathon tomorrow. Therefore your family needs one more room, right? But, I’m sorry to say this. As you mentioned, all of the hotels in town including our hotel are fully booked. The only thing we can do now is to set two baby beds for two children. I’m sorry for the situation and the inconvenience. If you make a reservation in advance next time, we will provide the best service. Thank you for your understanding and I sincerely apologize the inconvenience again.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름].

Thanks for the class a while back. It\'s always nice talking to you.

Here are the corrections for your homework. Go over it.

See you tomorrow.

Teacher Rowena


Good afternoon~, Ms. [Name].

>>CORRECT!~~

This is [이름], the manager of ABC hotel.

>>CORRECT!~~

I understand your situation.

>>CORRECT!~~

You’re saying that two small beds are not enough for 2 adults and 4 kids to sleep at night.

>> You\'re saying that two small beds are not enough for 2 adults and for 4 kids to sleep at night.

In addition, your husband needs a good night’s rest because of the marathon tomorrow.

>>CORRECT!~~

Therefore your family needs one more room, right?

>>CORRECT!~~

But, I’m sorry to say this.

>>CORRECT!~~

OR: But I regret to tell you this.

As you mentioned, all of the hotels in town including our hotel are fully booked.

>>CORRECT!~~

The only thing we can do now is to set two baby beds for two children.

>>CORRECT!~~

I’m sorry for the situation and the inconvenience.

>>I\'m sorry for the situation and for the inconvenience.

If you make a reservation in advance next time, we will provide the best service.

>>CORRECT!~~

Thank you for your understanding and I sincerely apologize the inconvenience again.

>>CORRECT!~~

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