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2018-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Last year, a group meeting of patients with alopecia totalis and universialis has been launched. As a member of Korean Hair Research Society (KHRS), she has been involved in the developing the patient committee. The population of the patient committee are comprised of about 50 patients and their family members. She also played an important role in a group meeting of children with alopecia totalis and alopecia universialis in Korea. This project is called as Green Hair Campaign, which is held by KHRS. The participants were 30 childrens and their siblings and of their parents and they were taught about the disease etiology and management and enjoyed activities . She helped all the preparation and progression of the event and supported them academically and mentally. All participants (N=) including the children and their family had a bonding time and shared their sufferings.

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Q5. Last year, a group meeting of patients with alopecia totalis and universialis has been launched. As a member of Korean Hair Research Society (KHRS), she has been involved in the developing the patient committee. The population of the patient committee are comprised of about 50 patients and their family members.
She also played an important role in a group meeting of children with alopecia totalis and alopecia universialis in Korea. This project is called as Green Hair Campaign, which is held by KHRS. The participants were 30 childrens and their siblings and of their parents and they were taught about the disease etiology and management and enjoyed activities . She helped all the preparation and progression of the event and supported them academically and mentally. All participants (N=) including the children and their family had a bonding time and shared their  sufferings.


>> Last year, a group meeting of patients with alopecia totalis and universialis has been launched. As a member of Korean Hair Research Society (KHRS), she has been involved in developing the patient committee. The population of the patient committee is comprised of about 50 patients and their family members. She also played an important role in a group meeting of children with alopecia totalis and alopecia universialis in Korea. This project is called Green Hair Campaign, which is  hosted by the KHRS annually.(OR: This project is called Green Hair Campaign, which is held annually by KHRS).The participants were 30 children, their siblings and their parents. They were also taught about the disease etiology and management and enjoyed other various activities. She helped in the preparation and progression of the event and supported them academically and mentally. All participants (N=) including the children and their families had a bonding time and shared their  struggles. 

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