Quantula Striata(species of bioluminscent snail)
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Quantula striata,also known as Dyakia striata,is a species of medium sized,air breathing,tropical land snail.It is a terrestrial,pulmonate,gastropod mollusk family Dyakiidae.It's egg glow in the dark, and junveniles and most adult s give off flashes green light.It's the only species in the genies Quantula.This species occurs in Singapore,Malaysia,Cambodia,the Philipphine,Fiji,and some island in the Rhio Archipelago.The shell of an adualt snails 16~27mm in widths.The colour of shells can be brown,shadingto white underneath.
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Quantula striata,also known as Dyakia striata,is a species of medium sized,air breathing,tropical land snail.
>> Correct!
It is a terrestrial,pulmonate,gastropod mollusk family Dyakiidae.
>> It is a terrestrial, pulmonate, gastropod mollusk in the family \"Dyakiidae\".
It\'s egg glow in the dark, and junveniles and most adult s give off flashes green light.
>> Correct!
It\'s the only species in the genies Quantula.
>> It\'s the only species in the genus Quantula.
This species occurs in Singapore,Malaysia,Cambodia,the Philipphine,Fiji,and some island in the Rhio Archipelago.
>> This species occurs in Singapore, Malaysia, Cambodia, Philippines, Fiji, and some islands in the Rhio Archipelago.
The shell of an adualt snails 16~27mm in widths.
>> The shell of an adult snail is 16-27mm. in width.
The colour of shells can be brown,shadingto white underneath.
>> The color of the shell is brown, shading to white underneath.
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