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I am writing to ask something to you. First of all I thank your correction.
My questions is about sentence which you corrected.
My father had worked as Health and Welfare department official for more than 30 years.
-> My father works.
Actually the reason why I used “had worked”was because my father retired before about 10 years ago. Then I wonder if“had worked”was right in that sentence.
This is today’s my writing.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] I apologize for I misunderstood your sentence. Thank you for telling me. Yes, you are right, the expression \"had worked\" is correct. Enjoy writing.
~Teacher Aki^^
I am writing to ask something to you.
>> I am writing to ask something from you.
OR: I would like to ask something.
First of all I thank your correction.
>> First of all, thank you for your correction.
My questions is about sentence which you corrected.
>> My question is about the sentence which you corrected.
My father had worked as Health and Welfare department official for more than 30 years.
>> My father had worked as a Health and Welfare Department official.
-> My father works. (Sorry my bad, I thought your father is still working)
Actually the reason why I used “had worked”was because my father retired before about 10 years ago.
>> Actually, the reason why I used \"had worked\" because my father retired from work about 10 years ago.
Then I wonder if“had worked”was right in that sentence.
>> CORRECT
OR: I wonder if I had used the right expression \"had worked\"
This is today’s my writing.
>> This is for my writing today.
Thank you.
~Teacher Aki^^
I am writing to ask something to you.
>> I am writing to ask something from you.
OR: I would like to ask something.
First of all I thank your correction.
>> First of all, thank you for your correction.
My questions is about sentence which you corrected.
>> My question is about the sentence which you corrected.
My father had worked as Health and Welfare department official for more than 30 years.
>> My father had worked as a Health and Welfare Department official.
-> My father works. (Sorry my bad, I thought your father is still working)
Actually the reason why I used “had worked”was because my father retired before about 10 years ago.
>> Actually, the reason why I used \"had worked\" because my father retired from work about 10 years ago.
Then I wonder if“had worked”was right in that sentence.
>> CORRECT
OR: I wonder if I had used the right expression \"had worked\"
This is today’s my writing.
>> This is for my writing today.
Thank you.
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