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2021-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Actually the reason why I used “had worked”was because my father retired before about 10 years ago. >> Actually, the reason why I used \"had worked\" because my father retired from work about 10 years ago. I have a question again.^^ I wonder if I used the right word \"was\"

강사 첨삭

Good Morning [이름] I also removed \"was\" because of the word I \"used\", there are so many past tense in that sentence already and I am trying to lessen redundancy (redundancy refers to the repetition of the same idea or item of information within a phrase, clause, or sentence). Well, thanks for showing enthusiasm in the English language.
~Teacher Aki^^

Actually the reason why I used “had worked” was because my father retired before about 10 years ago.
>> Actually, the reason why I used \"had worked\" because my father retired from work about 10 years ago.

I have a question again.^^
>> CORRECT
OR: I have another question.
I wonder if I used the right word \"was\"
>> CORRECT
OR: I wonder if I used the appropriate term \"was\".

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