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Can you get a cash from the government until 80 in Philippines?
We can get a pension until dying.
So government go into financial trouble.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Yes, in the Philippines, we have cash grants for Filipinos residing in the Philippines or abroad, and these are for ages 80-85- 90 and 95, and they will get 10,000 ( $176) and when a person reaches the age of 100. A cash grant of 100,000 ($1,176 ) is given. This initiative was proposed in order to encourage Filipinos to lead a healthy lifestyle. You know, Filipinos are the laziest people to exercise according to a survey because of the hot weather, and with that, some people do not even reach the age of 80.
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Can you get a cash from the government until 80 in Philippines?
>>> Can you get cash from the government until 80 in the Philippines?
We can get a pension until dying.
>>> We can get a pension until we die.
So government go into financial trouble.
>>> So the government goes into financial trouble.
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