Question 6 of TOEIC- Describe your favorite TV program.
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Question 6 of TOEIC- Describe your favorite TV program.
A) My favorite TV program is \'I live alone\'.
There are some reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, while I watch the celebrities living alone, I sometime empathize with them. It makes me think that they are more human than I think.
Secondly, All the members of the program have their own unique personalities. That makes viewers laugh.
That\'s why \'I live alone\' is my favorite TV program.
Teacher~
If you don\'t mind, I prefer to get part 5 or part 6 (question 10, 11) of TOEIC SPEAKING.
Because these are more difficult for me when I study TOEIC Speaking alone.
Thank you!~
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Hi Bo [이름],
Oh, thanks for the information. I sure will find you more challenging questions from TOEIC next time:)
-Rachel
My favorite TV program is \'I live alone\'.
There are some reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, while I watch the celebrities living alone, I sometime empathize with them. It makes me think that they are more human than I think.
There are some reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, while I watch the celebrities living alone, I sometime empathize with them. It makes me think that they are more human than I think.
>> correct
>> Generally, while watching celebrities living alone, I sometimes empathize with them because it makes me realize that they are more human than what I originally thought.
Secondly, All the members of the program have their own unique personalities. That makes viewers laugh.
That\'s why \'I live alone\' is my favorite TV program.
Secondly, All the members of the program have their own unique personalities. That makes viewers laugh.
That\'s why \'I live alone\' is my favorite TV program.
>> correct
>> Secondly, all the members have their own unique personalities that gives viewers reasons to laugh; therefore, it is my favorite TV show.
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