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2011-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Well, Today is changed the telephone in home. So it was really be good but it something wrong. I'll do the fixed. And Question. 1. Did teacher was having a great time during vacation? 2. When is teacher's birthday? 3. if it past did theacher get a great gifted by husband(if didn't get married, i'm sorry)? 4. when is the finish of theacher scheudle?? Today, I think i'll finished fot question.^^ I hope dear.thecher's answers... I hope dear.thecher's answers... I hope dear.thecher's answers... I hope dear.thecher's answers... I hope dear.thecher's answers...

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! You did a good job writing this! You made some interesting questions for me! Well, I did not have a vacation but I sometimes have time to do a lot of things in the weekend. My birthday is on March 24 and I am not married yet; I have a boyfriend and he gave me flowers and a jacket for my birthday gifts. I don't know when our schedule will end. I had a great time answering your questions! Have a nice night! -T. Karla-   Well, Today is changed the telephone in home. >> Well, today we changed the telephone at home.So it was really be good but it something wrong. >> So it was really good but it something went wrong.I'll do the fixed. >>I will fix it.And Question. >>And I have a question.1. Did teacher was having a great time during vacation? >>1. Did teacher have a great time during the vacation?2. When is teacher's birthday? >>Correct3. if it past did theacher get a great gifted by husband(if didn't get married, i'm sorry)? >>3. If it passed, did teacher get a great gift from her husband (If she is married, I'm sorry)?4. when is the finish of theacher scheudle??>>4. When is the end of teacher's schedule??Today, I think i'll finished fot question.^^ >> Today, I think I'll finished the question.^^I hope dear.thecher's answers... >>I hope to see dear teacher's answers.I hope dear.thecher's answers... >> I hope to see dear teacher's answers.I hope dear.thecher's answers... >> I hope to see dear teacher's answers.I hope dear.thecher's answers... >> I hope to see dear teacher's answers.I hope dear.thecher's answers... >> I hope to see dear teacher's answers.

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