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2019-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Hi Ally, I really appreciate your comments and energy to our class. And the below is my email sent to vice president of our Americal supplier. My boss says it looks not polite. Can you let me know how my email can be more polite? I would appreciate the correction. Thank you. Hi Brian, I would like to update you that our customer is going to skip the order for 30ea in September because backorder 23ea was delivered to them in August and so they want the order for August to be delivered in September. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi Louis! ^^



Thank you so much!

I also appreciate your energy and openness during our classes.

I hope we enjoy more conversations in the future. ^^

I\'m happy to help. ^^

~t. Ally


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Hi Brian,

I would like to update you that our customer is going to skip the order for 30ea in September because backorder 23ea was delivered to them in August and so they want the order for August to be delivered in September.


Hi Brian,


I would like to give you an update regarding our customer.

They are going to skip the order for 30ea this coming September because the backorder of 23ea was already delivered to them this in August.

I would also like to let you know that they want the order for August to be delivered in September instead.

Please be advised.

Thank you!

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