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2010-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Monica

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Q: I'd like to paraphrase the first sentence to the second one. Which adverb is most appropriate for the second sentence to have the same meaning as the first one 1) With its headquarters based in paris, the oraganizaion seeks to ast as consultative assebly 2) Its headquarters is based in paris, the oraganizaion seeks to ast as consultative assebly All human are born and eventually die every day,every second. And please check whether the following expressions right; With a closer look at positive aspects of the death, we can find it is actually not as bad as we think. To some, life may not be valuable but the seemingly worthless life can be most valuable to others

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Happy Thursday [이름]!!     I'm amazed with your interest to improve more.  That's very good.  That's one quality most successful persons have.  Keep improving. Great job!     Monica   Q: I'd like to paraphrase the first sentence to the second one. >>>I'd like to paraphrase the first sentence to make it similar to the second one.Which adverb is most appropriate for the second sentence to have the same meaning as the first one >>>correct1) With its headquarters based in paris, the oraganization seeks to ast as consultative assembly >>>correct2) Its headquarters is based in paris, the oraganization seeks to ast as consultative assembly >>>Given that its headquarters is based in paris, the oraganization seeks to act as consultative assembly >>>Its  headquarters is based in paris, certainly  the oraganization seeks to act as consultative assembly >>>the organization certainly seeks to act as consultative assemblyAll human are born and eventually die every day,every second.>>>All humans are born and will eventually die.  Thousands of people die every second of the day.And please check whether the following expressions right; >>>correctWith a closer look at positive aspects of the death, we can find it is actually not as bad as we think.>>>With acloser look at the positive aspects of Death, we will find out it is actually not as bad as we think it is.To some, life may not be valuable but the seemingly worthless life can be most valuable to others >>>correct

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