Question: What do you think is the best inheritance we get from our parents?
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer: In my case, the best inheritance from my parents is confident.
They always emphasize that if you think about confident in your mind then you can have a chance to succed in the future. It is the key of your life so you have to be prepared all difficult situation with your confident attitude.
Secondly, passion for studing is another significant of inheritance from my parents.
My parents can not enter the university because our parents generation's economic circumstance was so bad. So only a few rich family's students can study in university. From that time they think that i will be succeed and give a chace to my kids to study in famous university. I follow my parents opinion and study hard until graduate from university. It lead to me the famous foreign global company.
In conclusion, be confident and always to be prepared are the most crucial point of my parent's inheritance.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Derek!^^
You have proven quite a point wih your answers!^^
It\'s never a matter of the University name but I think that what matters most
is that we did our best as students and reached our goal honestly and with determination!^^
Good job!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Answer: In my case, the best inheritance from my parents is confident.
>> Answer: In my case, the best inheritance from my parents is confidence.They always emphasize that if you think about confident in your mind then you can have a chance to succed in the future.
>> They always emphasize that if you think about confidence in your mind then you can have a chance to succeed in the future It is the key of your life so you have to be prepared all difficult situation with your confident attitude.>> It is the key of your life so you have to be prepared for all difficult situations with your confident attitude.Secondly, passion for studing is another significant of inheritance from my parents.
>> Secondly, passion for studying is another significance of inheritance from my parents.My parents can not enter the university because our parents generation\'s economic circumstance was so bad.
>> My parents can not enter the University because our parents\' economic circumstance was so bad in their generation.
So only a few rich family\'s students can study in university.
>> So only a few students from rich families can study in the University.
From that time they think that i will be succeed and give a chace to my kids to study in famous university.
>> From that time they think that I will succeed and give a chance to my kids to study in a famous University. I follow my parents opinion and study hard until graduate from university.
>> I follow my parents opinion and I study hard until I will graduate from the University. It lead to me the famous foreign global company.
>> It will lead me to be famous in a foreign global company.In conclusion, be confident and always to be prepared are the most crucial point of my parent\'s inheritance.
>> In conclusion, be confident and to always be prepared are the most crucial point of my parent\'s inheritance.
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