Question: what korean product would you like to be internationally promoted? why?

2014-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Answer: First of all, i would like to introduce our country's traditional food. These days Korean dishes are very famous for foreign people. It is affected by air flight dishes and Korean-culture flow. Especially, I want to tell you about Gal-Bee. There are two types of Gal-Bee. First one is made of pig and the other is made of cow. Personally i recommend to you pig Gal-Bee. because pig Gal-bee is sweet, tender and cheap rather than cow Gal-bee.

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Hi there Derek!^^ Thank you for answering you homework!^^ I love korean pork!^^ SAMGYUPSAL!^^ hahahaha As a foreigner I do agree that meat dishes are popular from Korean food. Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: First of all, i would like to introduce our country\'s traditional food. >> CORRECT OR> I would make an introduction of our traditional food.These days Korean dishes are very famous for foreign people. >> These days Korean dishes are very famous to foreign people. It is affected by air flight dishes and Korean-culture flow. >> CORRECT OR> The factors for this would be airline food and the flow of Korean culture.Especially, I want to tell you about Gal-Bee. >> I especially want to tell you about Gal-bee.There are two types of Gal-Bee. >> CORRECT OR> There are two varieties for Gal-bee. First one is made of pig and the other is made of cow. >> CORRECT OR> One would be pork and the other is beef.Personally i recommend to you pig Gal-Bee. >> I personally recomment pork Gal-bee.because pig Gal-bee is sweet, tender and cheap rather than cow Gal-bee. >> Because pork Gal-bee is sweet, tender and cheaper than beef Galbi.

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