Question: what korean product would you like to be internationally promoted? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer: First of all, i would like to introduce our country's traditional food.
These days Korean dishes are very famous for foreign people.
It is affected by air flight dishes and Korean-culture flow.
Especially, I want to tell you about Gal-Bee. There are two types of Gal-Bee.
First one is made of pig and the other is made of cow.
Personally i recommend to you pig Gal-Bee.
because pig Gal-bee is sweet, tender and cheap rather than cow Gal-bee.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Derek!^^
Thank you for answering you homework!^^
I love korean pork!^^ SAMGYUPSAL!^^ hahahaha
As a foreigner I do agree that meat dishes are popular from Korean food.
Have a great day ahead!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
First of all, i would like to introduce our country\'s traditional food.
>> CORRECT
OR> I would make an introduction of our traditional food.These days Korean dishes are very famous for foreign people.
>> These days Korean dishes are very famous to foreign people. It is affected by air flight dishes and Korean-culture flow.
>> CORRECT
OR> The factors for this would be airline food and the flow of Korean culture.Especially, I want to tell you about Gal-Bee.
>> I especially want to tell you about Gal-bee.There are two types of Gal-Bee.
>> CORRECT
OR> There are two varieties for Gal-bee.
First one is made of pig and the other is made of cow.
>> CORRECT
OR> One would be pork and the other is beef.Personally i recommend to you pig Gal-Bee.
>> I personally recomment pork Gal-bee.because pig Gal-bee is sweet, tender and cheap rather than cow Gal-bee.
>> Because pork Gal-bee is sweet, tender and cheaper than beef Galbi.
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