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Hello Monica^^
Pleae check the follwing sentence
My aunt was born in an extreamly poor family, but later to become a famous doctor.
All the best architectrures come out with a perfect bluprint
He tells his grandchildren to live with enthusiasm, saying his stories of regreful experiences in younger age.
Many thanks for your correction
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Hello [이름]!!!
It's Friday again. Days really run very fast. It's always my pleasure to help you when it comes to learning English. You're doing a great job so keep it up.
Monica
Hello Monica^^
>>>correctPleae check the follwing sentence>>>Please check the following sentences if they correct.My aunt was born in an extreamly poor family, but later to become a famous doctor.>>>My aunt was born having an extremely poor family, but she became a famous doctor. All the best architectrures come out with a perfect bluprint>>>All the best architectures come out from a perfect blueprint.He tells his grandchildren to live with enthusiasm, saying his stories of regreful experiences in younger age.>>>He tells his grandchildren to be enthusiastic, he tells his stories about his regretful experiences at a young age.Many thanks for your correction
>>>correct
>>>(>>better) Thanks a lot for your correction.
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