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2010-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hello Monica^^ Pleae check the follwing sentence My aunt was born in an extreamly poor family, but later to become a famous doctor. All the best architectrures come out with a perfect bluprint He tells his grandchildren to live with enthusiasm, saying his stories of regreful experiences in younger age. Many thanks for your correction

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Hello [이름]!!! It's Friday again.  Days really run very fast.  It's always my pleasure to help you when it comes to learning English.  You're doing a great job so keep it up. Monica   Hello Monica^^ >>>correctPleae check the follwing sentence>>>Please check the following sentences if they correct.My aunt was born in an extreamly poor family, but later to become a famous doctor.>>>My aunt was born having an extremely poor family, but she became a famous doctor. All the best architectrures come out with a perfect bluprint>>>All the best architectures come out  from a perfect blueprint.He tells his grandchildren to live with enthusiasm, saying his stories of regreful experiences in younger age.>>>He tells his grandchildren to be enthusiastic,  he tells his stories about his regretful experiences at a young age.Many thanks for your correction >>>correct >>>(>>better) Thanks a lot for your correction.

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