Questions...
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강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!!!
Happy Friday!
How do you feel today?
I am sorry if I checked your composition late.
Good luck for today.
I am excited to hear your stories.
See you.
Teacher Nina
First of all, welcome Mr. [Name] to Korea.
>> Better: First of all, Welcome to Korea, Mr. [Name].
Thank you very much for making time out of your business schedule to pay a visit to GM Korea.
>> correct
>> OR: Thank you so much for making time out of your hectic schedule to pay a visit to GM Korea.
I have a few questions.
>> I have few questions for you.
Let me ask the easy one first.
>> correct
I think almost a year has passed since you joined our company.
>> correct
How was your past 12 months?
>> correct
Was it tougher than you had expected?
>> correct
Do you feel comfortable working now?
>> correct
My second question is about our future.
>> correct
The competition is getting fierce not only in Korea, but also in all over the world.
>> The competition is getting fierce not only in Korea, but also all over the world.
In order to win the competition, what will be our successor?
>> Did you mean: In order to win the competition, what will be our strategy?
How can we differentiate our brand from other luxury brands?
>> correct
>> OR: How can we differentiate our brand from other luxurious brands?
My third question is about marketing strategies.
>> correct
We are all well aware that we have to improve brand image.
>> We are all well aware that we have to improve the brand image.
However, we all suffer from the budget constraint?
>> However, we all suffer from budget constraint.
How can we improve our brand image with limited budget?
>> How can we improve our brand image with a limited budget?
My last question is about company\'s culture.
>> correct
You have experienced working in many different companies.
>> correct
How would you evaluate those companies in terms of the way they are working?
>> correct
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