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2015-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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First of all, welcome Mr. [Name] to Korea. Thank you very much for making time out of your business schedule to pay a visit to GM Korea. I have a few questions. Let me ask the easy one first. I think almost a year has passed since you joined our company. How was your past 12 months? Was it tougher than you had expected? Do you feel comfortable working now? My second question is about our future. The competition is getting fierce not only in Korea, but also in all over the world. In order to win the competition, what will be our successor? How can we differentiate our brand from other luxury brands? My third question is about marketing strategies. We are all well aware that we have to improve brand image. However, we all suffer from the budget constraint? How can we improve our brand image with limited budget? My last question is about company's culture. You have experienced working in many different companies. How would you evaluate those companies in terms of the way they are working?

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!!!

Happy Friday!

How do you feel today?

I am sorry if I checked your composition late.

Good luck for today.

I am excited to hear your stories.

See you.
Teacher Nina


First of all, welcome Mr. [Name] to Korea.

>> Better: First of all, Welcome to Korea, Mr. [Name].

Thank you very much for making time out of your business schedule to pay a visit to GM Korea.

>> correct

>> OR: Thank you so much for making time out of your hectic schedule to pay a visit to GM Korea.

I have a few questions.

>> I have few questions for you.

Let me ask the easy one first.

>> correct

I think almost a year has passed since you joined our company.

>> correct

How was your past 12 months?

>> correct

Was it tougher than you had expected? 

>> correct

Do you feel comfortable working now?

>> correct

My second question is about our future.

>> correct

The competition is getting fierce not only in Korea, but also in all over the world. 

>> The competition is getting fierce not only in Korea, but also all over the world. 

In order to win the competition, what will be our successor?

>> Did you mean: In order to win the competition, what will be our strategy?

How can we differentiate our brand from other luxury brands? 

>> correct

>> OR: How can we differentiate our brand from other luxurious brands?

My third question is about marketing strategies.

>> correct

We are all well aware that we have to improve brand image.

>> We are all well aware that we have to improve the brand image. 

However, we all suffer from the budget constraint?

>> However, we all suffer from budget constraint.

How can we improve our brand image with limited budget?

>> How can we improve our brand image with a limited budget?

My last question is about company\'s culture.

>> correct

You have experienced working in many different companies.

>> correct

How would you evaluate those companies in terms of the way they are working?

>> correct

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