Questions of writing

Dear [Name], Good day to you. As yr good teaching, I started to get confidence. I have some questions regarding ering mail. Q1. By copy to. When I want to corbon copy to another person in charge, can it use as following? Dear [Name], Well noted with thanks. By copy to Jenny, Pls make sure it is possible or not. Q2. Acoordingly I would like to check this usage when I use mail. Pls check it accordingly. Tomorrow, I would ask you more questions concerning some expression. Many thanks & look forwarding to listening yr feedback.

Dear [이름], I am so happy about this feedback from you. I appreciate it so much! I am ecstatic that you are starting to be confident in speaking. ^^ I checked some of your sentences. You did a good job on the use of those two expressions. Please feel free to ask me some uses of expressions. Jenny Here are the corrections: Dear [Name],>>Correct.Good day to you. >>Correct.As yr good teaching, I started to get confidence. >>Because of your good teaching, I started to gain confidence. I have some questions regarding ering mail. >>I have some questions regarding writing mails.Q1. By copy to.When I want to corbon copy to another person in charge, can it use as following? >>When I want to carbon copy it to another person in charge, can I use it as follows?Dear [Name],>>Correct.Well noted with thanks. >>It is well noted. Thanks.By copy to Jenny >>Correct.Pls make sure it is possible or not.>>Please make sure if it’s possible or not.Q2. AccordinglyI would like to check this usage when I use mail. >> I would like to check the usage when I use it in a mail.Please check it accordingly. >>Correct.Tomorrow, I would ask you more questions concerning some expression. >> Tomorrow, I would ask you more questions concerning some expressions. Many thanks & look forwarding to listening yr feedback. >>Many thanks and I am looking forward to listening to your feedback.