Quiet neighborhood
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to describe my neighborhood as a word \'quite\'. I\'ve never meet them before, so I don\'t really know many things about my neighborhood. In Korea, individualism is really strong, so it\'s common that we don\'t know and familiar with each other. However, during the stay in Canada, everyone welcomed and greeted me even though they weren\'t my neighborhood. I believe this kind of welcoming and greeting culture is the thing that we should learn and try in our real lives.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Melody! ^^,)
Neighborhoods have a major impact on a person\'s life, influencing physical health, emotional well-being, economic prospects, and social conduct.
Healthy environments reduce stress, increase engagement, and improve health outcomes for all inhabitants.
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__T. Mayleen :)
I would like to describe my neighborhood as a word \'quite\'.
>>> I would like to describe my neighborhood with the word \'quiet.\'
I\'ve never meet them before, so I don\'t really know many things about my neighborhood.
>>> I\'ve never met them before, so I don\'t really know many things about my neighborhood.
In Korea, individualism is really strong, so it\'s common that we don\'t know and familiar with each other.
>>> In Korea, individualism is really strong, so it\'s common that we don\'t know each other and aren\'t familiar with each other.
However, during the stay in Canada, everyone welcomed and greeted me even though they weren\'t my neighborhood.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: However, throughout my time in Canada, everyone welcomed and greeted me, even though they were not in my area.
I believe this kind of welcoming and greeting culture is the thing that we should learn and try in our real lives.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I believe that this type of welcoming and greeting culture is something that we should learn and practice in our daily lives.
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