Racist
학생이 쓴 원문
I have never met the person who is a racist.
But, today, we can see many people who think that foreigners are different from them, so people bother them easily.
It is better than the past but, it still exists all around the world. So, we have to remind this and protect the people who are weak and have a different culture.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
In one way or another when we were younger we have been racists to our classmates or to other nationality. However, as we grow older, we learn that it is not supposed to be done.
So let us be peace loving people by respecting and caring for one another.
Thanks for this answer. See you in a short while!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
But, today, we can see many people who think that foreigners are different from them, so people bother them easily.
>> Correct!
Or: But, today, we can see many people who think that foreigners are different from them so people are bothered by them easily.
It is better than the past but, it still exists all around the world.
>> Correct!
So, we have to remind this and protect the people who are weak and have a different culture.
>> So, we have to be reminded by this and protect the people who are weak and have a better culture.
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