radiation
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In Korea, radiation was found in the air.
>>In Korea, radiation was found in the air.
I read a news that Japan released water containing nuclear substances to the sea.
>>I read a news that Japan released water contain nuclear substances.
>>OR: I read the news which says that Japan released water to the sea which contain nuclear substances.
A person from Hukuoka atomic power station said, the water will spread all around the world, but it will not cause any human disease because the water will be diluted.
>>A person from Hukuoka Atomic Power Station said that the water will spread all around the world, but it will not cause any human disease because the water will be diluted.
However, I think that nobody knows what would be the effect of the radiation.
>>correct
I'm worried about the future.
>>correct
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