Radical Change versus Incremental Change
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There are two basic types of change that are polar opposites: radical change and incremental change.
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There has been a surprising amount of debate over which kind of change is better.
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Some people promote the idea of innovation, or radical change.
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Others believe that smaller and gradual improvements are better.
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People who believe in innovation often think that incremental change is too slow.
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Those that believe in incremental change often believe that radical change is too risky and isn’t sustainable.
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So who is right?
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Which is the better form of change?
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>> Which one is better form of change?
The situation determines the type of change to use.
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If we want to make rapid changes, then obviously radical change is the way to go.
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However, if we want to make sustainable changes, then incremental change is preferable.
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What if we can combine the speed of radical change with the sustainability and continual improvement of incremental change?
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We can do this by consciously incorporating both types of change into our lives.
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