Radical Change versus Incremental Change

2015-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are two basic types of change that are polar opposites: radical change and incremental change. There has been a surprising amount of debate over which kind of change is better. Some people promote the idea of innovation, or radical change. Others believe that smaller and gradual improvements are better. People who believe in innovation often think that incremental change is too slow. Those that believe in incremental change often believe that radical change is too risky and isn’t sustainable. So who is right? Which is the better form of change? The situation determines the type of change to use. If we want to make rapid changes, then obviously radical change is the way to go. However, if we want to make sustainable changes, then incremental change is preferable.What if we can combine the speed of radical change with the sustainability and continual improvement of incremental change? We can do this by consciously incorporating both types of change into our lives.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름] ^^

Happy Tuesday. ^^

Perfect composition. ^^

Thanks for sharing your ideas about the matter.

We should be open for changes in our lives.

Let us be optimistic.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


There are two basic types of change that are polar opposites: radical change and incremental change.

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There has been a surprising amount of debate over which kind of change is better.

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Some people promote the idea of innovation, or radical change.

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Others believe that smaller and gradual improvements are better.

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People who believe in innovation often think that incremental change is too slow.

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Those that believe in incremental change often believe that radical change is too risky and isn’t sustainable.

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So who is right?

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Which is the better form of change?

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>> Which one is better form of change?

The situation determines the type of change to use.

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If we want to make rapid changes, then obviously radical change is the way to go.

>> Correct

However, if we want to make sustainable changes, then incremental change is preferable.

>> Correct

What if we can combine the speed of radical change with the sustainability and continual improvement of incremental change?

>> Correct

We can do this by consciously incorporating both types of change into our lives.

>> Correct

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