Rain!

2021-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I really wonder if rain can change my feelings. People say they are sensitive in spring or autumn. When they see flowers bloom and see leaves fall, they seem to feel their emotions change. However I am not. It doesn\'t matter to me whether it rains or not. I always feel good whether it is rain or not. Today is raining in my country. This is called \'spring rain\'. It seems to rain appropriately in season.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
Good job today!
What a way to start the week.
Never give up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I really wonder if rain can change my feelings.
>> Correct
People say they are sensitive in spring or autumn.
>> Correct
When they see flowers bloom and see leaves fall, they seem to feel their emotions change.
>> Correct
However I am not.
>> However I don\'t.
It doesn\'t matter to me whether it rains or not.
>> Correct
I always feel good whether it is rain or not.
>> I always feel good whether it is raining or not.
Today is raining in my country.
>> It\'s raining in my country today.
This is called \'spring rain\'.
>> Correct
It seems to rain appropriately in season.
>> It seems that rain is in season again.

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