Rain
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. I also do not like that kind of weather, It\'s gloomy and sad. T.T
But Wow! Hamburgers are really good. It\'s nice to know that you and your family like it.
Anyways, you did a good job on your sentences. Just be careful with the tenses of your verbs. Mind your plurals and your singulars.
Have a great day today! Take care^^
t.Chloe
Here are some of my corrections for you:
Yesterday was rainy.
>> Correct OR >> Yesterday, it was raining.
I don\'t like that weather. because that weather is hygroscopic
>> I don\'t like that kind of weather because that weather is hygroscopic.^^
but, my sister like that weather.
>> But my sister likes that kind of weather.
My sister seen drama at night.
>> My sister watches drama at night.
I seen that drama.too.
>> I watch the drama too.
And I ate hamburger with my mother.
>> CORRECT
OR> My mother and I ate hamburger.
My sister like hamburger very much.
>>My sister likes hamburger very much.^^
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