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2015-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Roxy

학생이 쓴 원문

It's raining day. My daughter has cold. My doughter has a cold on the chest. This Friday, My children have sports day. My children sad "mommy come shool please I wll runner to go" I will look for victory

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Good morning! Thanks for sharing this. I hope your children will get well soon so they can enjoy their sports day. I hope to hear more about it on Monday Ms. [Name]. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ It\'s raining day. >> It\'s a rainy day.My daughter has cold. >> My daughter has colds.My doughter has a cold on the chest. >> My daughter has pain on the chest. OR>> My daughter has colds.This Friday, My children have sports day. >> This Friday, my children will have a sports day.My children sad \"mommy come shool please I wll runner to go\" >> My children said, \"Mommy, come to our school please. I will be a runner.\"I will look for victory >> I will be victorious.

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