raining wedensday.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Ms.jaimme.
Today morning class with you, it was fantastic to me.
you know, i look forward to your class. your class is very fun and
useful for me.^^
Today,
i have a new MS. freind who living in BBK of the PHILIPPINE.
Her name is Treerat tanunchai.
Nick name is NUI. who is studying in sort of COM TECH.
So,i let her know what related a famous korea company ; SAM[이름] Co,
LTD.^^
We met by MSN messenger for improve ENGLISH.
to change the point,
I saw the NEWS about happened your country.
it's a pity. hope to be the normalization.
um...sorry for my essay late.
Have a good dream~^^ Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi Nick! Just got your essay. Keep them coming ok. Good job. I'm also looking forward to our classes. It's one of my favorite. Glad to know you're enjoying.
Talk to you in class. Take care!
>> Hello. Ms. [Name]
Today morning class with you, it was fantastic to me.
Today morning class with you, it was fantastic to me.
>> Our morning class today was fantastic!
you know, i look forward to your class.
you know, i look forward to your class.
>> Correct!
your class is very fun and useful for me.^^
>> Correct!
Today, i have a new MS. freind who living in BBK of the PHILIPPINE.
Today, i have a new MS. freind who living in BBK of the PHILIPPINE.
>> Today, I have a new MS friend who is living in BBK in the Philippines.
Her name is Treerat tanunchai.
Her name is Treerat tanunchai.
>> Correct!
Nick name is NUI. who is studying in sort of COM TECH.
Nick name is NUI. who is studying in sort of COM TECH.
>> Her nickname is NUI. She's studying COM TECH.
So,i let her know what related a famous korea company ; SAM[이름] Co,
So,i let her know what related a famous korea company ; SAM[이름] Co,
LTD.^^
>> So, I let her know about a related famous company in Korea; SAM[이름] Co, LTD.
We met by MSN messenger for improve ENGLISH.
We met by MSN messenger for improve ENGLISH.
>> We met via MSN messenger to improve our English.
to change the point,
to change the point,
>> Changing the subject,
I saw the NEWS about happened your country.
I saw the NEWS about happened your country.
>> I saw the news about what happened in your country.
it's a pity. hope to be the normalization.
it's a pity. hope to be the normalization.
>> It's a pity. Hope everything goes back to normal.
um...sorry for my essay late.
>> um... sorry for my late essay.
Have a good dream~^^ Bye~
um...sorry for my essay late.
>> um... sorry for my late essay.
Have a good dream~^^ Bye~
>> Correct!
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