rainny days
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I seldom like rainy days. The first reason is that I can\'t exercise outdoor sprots like soccer or basketball. I have a lot of memory of canceling the match due to the rain. The second reason is just mood. It\'s not cheerful during the rain. As rain drops, my energy goes down likewise. The final reason is my clothes and body going to be wet. Although I protect rain with umbrella, It can not be totally protect from rain. Moreover, if the rain goes heavily, my shoes are going to be fully wet. However, the rainny days are not always negative whether. Someday I wish the rainy day when I\'m taking a break at my home. I\'d liked to see the rain during eating a Korean style pancake. It\'s true that this is only for someday, so I usally doesn\'t like rainny days
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I seldom like rainy days.
>> I kinda like rainy days.
The first reason is that I can\'t exercise outdoor sprots like soccer or basketball.
>> The first reason is that I can\'t play outdoor sports like soccer or basketball.
I have a lot of memory of canceling the match due to the rain.
>> I remember a lot of cancelled games due to the rain.
The second reason is just mood.
>> The second reason is that it just affects my mood.
It\'s not cheerful during the rain.
>> I feel gloomy when it\'s raining.
As rain drops, my energy goes down likewise.
>> As the rain drops, my energy does likewise.
The final reason is my clothes and body going to be wet.
>> The final reason is that my clothes and my body get wet.
Although I protect rain with umbrella, It can not be totally protect from rain.
>> Although the umbrella is there to protect, it cannot totally protect me from the rain.
Moreover, if the rain goes heavily, my shoes are going to be fully wet.
>> Moreover, if it rains heavily, my shoes are going to be fully wet, too.
However, the rainny days are not always negative whether.
>> However, the rainy days aren\'t always negative.
Someday I wish the rainy day when I\'m taking a break at my home.
>> Some days, I\'m wishing for rainy days to come when I am taking a break at home.
I\'d liked to see the rain during eating a Korean style pancake.
>> I\'d like to see the rain when eating Korean style pancakes.
It\'s true that this is only for someday, so I usally doesn\'t like rainny days
>> I sometimes like it but I sometimes don\'t.
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