Rainwater
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [Writing Exercise] Do you think it\'s OKAY to drink rainwater? Why or why not?
I think it\'s not good to drink rainwater.
Because some rainwater have acid.
Drinking acid rainwater is dangerous.
I don\'t think we can drink rainwater.
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I think it\'s not good to drink rainwater.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I think it\'s not okay to drink rainwater.
Because some rainwater have acid.
Because some rainwater have acid.
>>> It\'s because it sometimes contain acid.
Drinking acid rainwater is dangerous.
Drinking acid rainwater is dangerous.
>>> CORRECT
I don\'t think we can drink rainwater.
I don\'t think we can drink rainwater.
>>> CORRECT
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