Rainy day
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On cold or rainy days,
I like to eat based soup dishes. Eating foods like noodles or ramen makes you feel nice and refresh
Or, I like super crispy fried. like fried chicken, It is a crunchy sound with a bite and has a good texture.
I\'m write about this subject, suddenly I want to eat at all. even though It\'s just past lunch time,
I\'m decide to my dinner menu, I will having a fried chicken tonight.
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Hi [이름]!
Now that you mentioned fried food, I also love that!
Hmmm...fried chicken would be great!
On cold or rainy days, I like to eat based soup dishes.
>>> I like to eat soup on cold or rainy days.
Eating foods like noodles or ramen makes you feel nice and refresh
Or, I like super crispy fried.
>>> Eating foods like noodles and ramen makes me feel good and refreshed, or I like crispy fries.
like fried chicken, It is a crunchy sound with a bite and has a good texture.
>>> It has a crispy sound at a mouth like fried chicken and a good texture.
I\'m write about this subject, suddenly I want to eat at all.
>>> I\'m writing about this topic, but I suddenly want to eat it.
even though It\'s just past lunch time, I\'m decide to my dinner menu, I will having a fried chicken tonight.
>>> It\'s a little past lunch time, but I\'m going to choose a dinner menu and eat chicken tonight.
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