rainy day~

2010-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 lina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi~Lina I'm sorry. We didn't have a chane study because I was driving for pick up my old brother. So, I will prepared our class. It is raining right now. I preparing my experiment. Today, I have had a headache all day long. I feel that I need take a break. I should go see a doctor. I think that The my health is more important than anyting else. Take care of yourself.

강사 첨삭

Hi John. It's okay,I understand your situation. I'm grateful that you have the chance to pick up the phone and talk to me. The weather is really strange now a days, In korea you have rain and snow on Spring. Here in the Philippines were suffering from drought. Our health is our wealth that's why you have to take care of yourself. Remember that "Prevention is better than cure"     -Lina   Hi~Lina >>Correct sentence.I'm sorry. >>Correct sentence.We didn't have a chane study because I was driving for pick up >>We didn’t have a chance to study because I was driving to pick upmy old brother. >>My older brotherSo, I will prepared our class. >>So, I will prepare for our class. It is raining right now. >>It is raining right now. I preparing my experiment. >>I’m preparing my experiment. Today, I have had a headache all day long. >>Correct sentence.I feel that I need take a break. >>I feel that I need to have a break. I should go see a doctor. >>I should go and see a doctor. I think that The my health is more important than anyting else. >>I think that my health is more important than anything else. Take care of yourself. >>Correct sentence.          

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