Rainy day
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like rain because it\'s hard to walk outside. There are many puddles and my socks get wet if I step on puddles. The sky is gray in raining day. The weather affects my mood and the day becomes gloomy day. However in summer, I like rain because the rain drops temperater. After raining, It\'s cool and moist in summer. I also like seeing rainbow after raining. It\'s beautiful and makes me happy. So I like rain only in summer. Except in summer, I don\'t like rain.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
There are many puddles and my socks get wet if I step on puddles.
>> CORRECT.
The sky is gray in raining day.
>> They sky is gray in a rainy day.
The weather affects my mood and the day becomes gloomy day.
>> The weather affects my mood and the day becomes gloomy.
However in summer, I like rain because the rain drops temperater.
>> However in summer, I like rain because the rain drops the temperature.
After raining, It\'s cool and moist in summer.
>> CORRECT.
I also like seeing rainbow after raining.
>> I also like seeing rainbow after the rain.
It\'s beautiful and makes me happy.
>> CORRECT.
So I like rain only in summer.
>> CORRECT.
Except in summer, I don\'t like rain.
>> CORRECT.
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