Rainy day but humid
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It was really welcoming rain but it was hot too. Because of raining it was humid than before.
>> The rain was really welcoming but it was too hot. The rain made it more humid than before.
These days there was no rain in Seoul. Today there was a rain for 5 hours.
>> These days, there is no rain in Seoul. However, it rained for 5 hours today.
But the atmosphere of the waether is too humid.
>> And the weather is too humid.
Tommorrow I have to participate baseball practice. And on Saturday there will be a baseball game.
>> Tomorrow, I have to participate in a baseball practice and on Saturday there will be a baseball game.
I hope it will be cool.
>> I hope it will be cooler.
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