Rainy Season
학생이 쓴 원문
The rainy season sets in. According to weather news, originally the rainy season had set in yesterday but it sets in today.
Of course, if it were raining, the harvest could turn out well, but I really don't like rainy season.
It makes me nasty, annoyed and uncomfortable. Besides at my office, my boss instructed me to grasp a situation of flooded districts.
So I went to the area in a pouring rain.
Although I wore a raincoat, I thoroughly got wet with rain. ㅠㅡㅠ
I wish it would stop right now.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!..I hate rainy season too. I just don’t like rain. It makes me feel gloomy and uncomfortable as well. I hope it is always sunny day for us to have a brighter day.Haha!..seee you [이름]!
The rainy season sets in.
>>>correct
According to weather news, originally the rainy season had set in yesterday but it sets in today.
>>>According to the weather news, rainy season had to be set in yesterday but it sets in today.
Of course, if it were raining, the harvest could turn out well, but I really don't like rainy season.
>>>Of course, if it is raining then the harvest would turn out well but I really don’t like rainy season.
It makes me nasty, annoyed and uncomfortable. Besides at my office, my boss instructed me to grasp a situation of flooded districts.
>>>correct
So I went to the area in a pouring rain.
>>>correct
Although I wore a raincoat, I thoroughly got wet with rain. ㅠㅡㅠ
I wish it would stop right now.
>>>correct
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