Rapunzel

Once upon, Rapunzel's parents were very pour. So her father stole witch's vegetables. But they were discovered by the witch! So they were lose their daughter, Rapunzel to the witch... When she was saint, her hair was very long! A prince heard about Rapunzel, and than he repaired her! But he fell down and he got his body from thorn! But her tear helped him woke up! And than they lived happily in Kingdom.

Hello there! Thank you for your composition today. Rapunzel\'s story is very touching. I\'m glad that you like it. Anyway, have a great day and I can\'t wait to see you in class! Have a wonderful Monday! ~T. Meg~ Once upon, Rapunzel\'s parents were very pour. >> Once upon a time, Rapunzel\'s parents were very poor. So her father stole witch\'s vegetables. >> So her father stole the witch\'s vegetables.But they were discovered by the witch! >> Correct!So they were lose their daughter, Rapunzel to the witch...>> So the witch took their daughter, that\'s Rapunzel. When she was saint, her hair was very long! >> Rapunzel had a very long hair.A prince heard about Rapunzel, and than he repaired her! >> A prince heard about Rapunzel, and than he rescued her.But he fell down and he got his body from thorn! >> But he fell down from a thorn!But her tear helped him woke up! >> Correct!  And than they lived happily in Kingdom. >> And than they lived happily in the Kingdom.