Raw fish
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Some people enjoy the natural taste of fresh ingredients when they eat raw fish such as marinated crabs or sashimi. Some restaurants specialize in marinating raw fish like shrimps, crabs, and salmon. Some people try to eat living octopuses, which I hate.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I really can’t imagine eating raw seafood because I’m very sensitive to its smell, but I understand that some people might enjoy it. For your homework, I changed ‘fish’ to ‘seafood’ since crabs and shrimp are not exactly fish.
- T. Caitlyn
Some people enjoy the natural taste of fresh ingredients when they eat raw fish such as marinated crabs or sashimi.
>> Some people enjoy the natural taste of fresh ingredients when they eat raw seafood, such as sashimi or marinated crabs.
Some restaurants specialize in marinating raw fish like shrimps, crabs, and salmon.
>> Some restaurants specialize in marinating raw seafood like shrimp, crabs, and salmon.
Some people try to eat living octopuses, which I hate.
>> CORRECT
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