RE : What was the strongest Typhoon when you ever had in Korea?
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If someone said \'Typhoon\', I remember \' Maemi, Rusa, Sahra.
above name of Typhoons, I think if you had a little experience, you will feel scary.
Flenkly, I remember a little bit, so I searched for internet and got some information.
Name \'Maemi\', Do you know it, actually, it is a little insect in Korea. but it was different thing as a typhoon,
It happened in 2003, it killed 30 persons, we lost a lot of houses, farms at that time.
I rembered something to make a work with tape. as you know, the typhoon make a big wind, so it will break the window, so I attached the type accross the windows of all in house.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~ Thank you for re-sending your homework. You did great. Keep up the good work.
Here are your corrections:
>> If someone says \'Typhoon\', I remember \"Maemi, Rusa, Sahra\".
>> The typhoon names above were the scariest typhoons I experienced.
>> Frankly, I only remember a little bit so I searched the internet to get some information.
>> The name \"Maemi\" came from the name of an insect in Korea.
but it was different thing as a typhoon,
>> But, as a Typhoon, it was different.
>> It happened in 2003, 30 people died and we lost a lot of houses, farms at that time.
>> I remembered, I used some tape.
as you know, the typhoon make a big wind, so it will break the window, so I attached the type accross the windows of all in house.
>> As you know, typhoons has strong winds that may break a window so I attached some tape across all the windows of our house.
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