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2012-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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*** What part of your body do you like the most and why? ^^ I think so my hand is most, but not a finger. And my favorit snack is biscuit. so I'd like to be a biscuit. Last I was saw a Super Bowl Halftime Show. Moddona is sing well/ and justin bieber is good to!

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for your composition. Take care! have a nice day. *** What part of your body do you like the most and why? ^^>>Correct.I think so my hand is most, but not a finger.>> I think my hand is my favorite part of my body but not my fingers.And my favorite snack is biscuit. >> Correct.so I\'d like to be a biscuit. >> Correct.Last I was saw a Super Bowl Halftime Show. >> Lastly, I saw/watched the Super Bowl Halftime Show.Moddona is sing well/ and justin bieber is good to! >>Maddona sings well and Justin Bieber is good, too!  

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