Reading a book

2010-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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I am partial to read a book. I like all kinds of books such as a comic book, a novel, a literature, an essay, a travel book and so on. Out of those kinds of books my favorite book is 'Yoshimoto Banana's novel'. If you read her work of novel -If it were novel, it would be very profound. On the other hand if it were work, it would be trivial- , you could know her values about love. She makes full use of a concise literary style. While I read her work or novel (as I stated above), I couldn't free myself from hers. If you have an opportunity, you had better read it.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!...I hope your doing fine always.:)It seems that you really enjoyed reading that book. I hope I can find that book here. I’ll try to search for it. Thank you. Have a nice day!   I am partial to read a book. I like all kinds of books such as a comic book, a novel, a literature, an essay, a travel book and so on. >>>I partially like reading books. >>>I like all kinds of book su8ch as comic book, novel, literature, essay, travel book and so on. Out of those kinds of books my favorite book is 'Yoshimoto Banana's novel'. >>>Out of those kind of books, my favorite book is “Yoshimoto Banana’s novel”. If you read her work of novel -If it were novel, it would be very profound. >>>If you will read about the novel, it is very profound. On the other hand if it were work, it would be trivial-, you could know her values about love. >>>But if it is not work on, it would be trivial. >>>In this story, you could also know how much she value about love. She makes full use of a concise literary style. >>>correct While I read her work or novel (as I stated above), I couldn't free myself from hers. >>>While I was reading her work or novel, as I stated above, I couldn’t free myself from hers. If you have an opportunity, you had better read it. >>>If you had the chance, I recommend you to read it.

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