Reading a book
학생이 쓴 원문
I am partial to read a book. I like all kinds of books such as a comic book, a novel, a literature, an essay, a travel book and so on.
Out of those kinds of books my favorite book is 'Yoshimoto Banana's novel'. If you read her work of novel -If it were novel, it would be very profound. On the other hand if it were work, it would be trivial-
, you could know her values about love.
She makes full use of a concise literary style.
While I read her work or novel (as I stated above), I couldn't free myself from hers. If you have an opportunity, you had better read it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!...I hope your doing fine always.:)It seems that you really enjoyed reading that book. I hope I can find that book here. I’ll try to search for it. Thank you. Have a nice day!
I am partial to read a book. I like all kinds of books such as a comic book, a novel, a literature, an essay, a travel book and so on.
>>>I partially like reading books.
>>>I like all kinds of book su8ch as comic book, novel, literature, essay, travel book and so on.
Out of those kinds of books my favorite book is 'Yoshimoto Banana's novel'.
>>>Out of those kind of books, my favorite book is “Yoshimoto Banana’s novel”.
If you read her work of novel -If it were novel, it would be very profound.
>>>If you will read about the novel, it is very profound.
On the other hand if it were work, it would be trivial-, you could know her values about love.
>>>But if it is not work on, it would be trivial.
>>>In this story, you could also know how much she value about love.
She makes full use of a concise literary style.
>>>correct
While I read her work or novel (as I stated above), I couldn't free myself from hers.
>>>While I was reading her work or novel, as I stated above, I couldn’t free myself from hers.
If you have an opportunity, you had better read it.
>>>If you had the chance, I recommend you to read it.
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