Reading an article

2011-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I read an article about Samsung in the class. In 1970s, Korea was poor and not much developed. We couldn’t have any technical base because of the Korean War. However, Samsung become one of the world-famous companies now. The article points out the success factors of Samsung. Thinking several years ahead and investing on R&D a lot is very important. In addition, this progress was driven by government especially Economic Development Board. Korean government built industrial parks and gave a lot of subsidy and grants. I can find many implications about the role of government. Also, I realize the importance of technical investment from this.

강사 첨삭

I appreciate what you wrote. I learned a lot from it. Just be more careful in some grammars next time ok. Take care of yourself.   Today, I read an article about Samsung in the class. >>Today, I read a Samsung article in the class. In 1970s, Korea was poor and not much developed. >>In 1970’s, Korea was poor and has not developed much. We couldn’t have any technical base because of the Korean War. >>correct However, Samsung become one of the world-famous companies now. >>However, Samsung became one of the world’s famous companies now. The article points out the success factors of Samsung. >>correct Thinking several years ahead and investing on R&D a lot is very important. >>Thinking several years ahead and investing a lot on R&D is very important. In addition, this progress was driven by government especially Economic Development Board. >>In addition, this progress was driven by the government especially the Economic Development Board. Korean government built industrial parks and gave a lot of subsidy and grants. >>Korean governent have built industrial parks and have given a lot of subsidy and grants. I can find many implications about the role of government. >>I can find many implications about the role of the government. Also, I realize the importance of technical investment from this. >>Also, I realized the importance of technical investment from this.

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