Reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies
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I think both of them are enjoyable and it depends on what kind of movies or books people select.
>> I think both of them are enjoyable, and it depends on what kinds of movies or books people select.
however, I can say that reading fiction is more helpful than watching movies for people to extend their vocabulary, improve reading and writing skill.
>> However, I can say that reading fiction is more helpful than watching movies for people to widen their vocabulary and improve their reading and writing skills.
In addition, It extends their range of interests, improves their imagination and helps them gain more knowledge and experience through books.
>> In addition, it extends their range of interests, improves their imaginations and helps them gain more knowledge and experiences through books.
Even though reading books have a lot of advantages, it has disadvantages that people easily feel sleepy when they are reading and people feel bored because reading books usually takes longer time than watching movies.
>> Even though reading books have a lot of advantages, it has disadvantages like people easily feel sleepy when they are reading, and people feel bored, because reading books usually takes longer time to do than watching movies.
On the other hand, watching movies have many benefits.
>> CORRECT!
It is good way to be relaxed, relive stress and have fun.
>> It\'s good for relaxing, relieving stress and having fun.
In conclusion, I think that there is no wonder that watching movies are more enjoyable and impressive than reading a book.
>> In conclusion, I think that there is no wonder that watching movies is more enjoyable and impressive than reading books.
However, reading a book brings more benefits for people in general.
>> However, reading books brings more benefits for people in general.
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