real?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was shocked in terms of ‘rental parnters’ itself.
In the previous times, prostitution is popular some areas in Korea including Seoul.
Of course there are differences between rental partners and prostitution.
But both are grotesque and abnormal in the relationship between men and women.
This shows corruption of capitalism that if you have money, you can get everything.
You can even buy real ‘HUMAN’ for placating your loneliness.
I am very shameful in spreading in Korea and Asia.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
It\'s been a long time since I\'ve read your thoughts.^^
My point of view here. why do wee need rental partners if we can have like the normal social interaction?
Aki~
I was shocked in terms of ‘rental parnters’ itself.
>>> I was shocked in terms of ‘rental parnters’ itself.
In the previous times, prostitution is popular some areas in Korea including Seoul.
>>> In previous times, prostitution is popular in some areas in Korea including Seoul.
Of course there are differences between rental partners and prostitution.
>>> Of course there are differences between rental partners and prostitution.
But both are grotesque and abnormal in the relationship between men and women.
>>> CORRECT!
This shows corruption of capitalism that if you have money, you can get everything.
>>> This shows the corruption of capitalism that if you have money, you can get everything.
You can even buy real ‘HUMAN’ for placating your loneliness.
>>> You can even buy real ‘HUMAN’ to placate your loneliness.
I am very shameful in spreading in Korea and Asia.
>>> I am very ashamed of spreading in Korea and Asia.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.