rearranged composition 3.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this matter. :)
I appreciate your efforts and continue to strive for the better! :)
I am still hoping for you to answer the previous homeworks.
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T. Jeny ^^
Those anti-Atget critics usually make a conclusion by blaming it on John Szarkowski who was a curator in Photography Dept. MOMA, and also directed and drew a plan for Atget\' photo exhibition.
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The distrust interrupting to evaluate Atget and his photos was originated from that time when Rosalind Krauss censured Szakowski who highly evaluated Atget.
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And it happened a longtime ago, however, the important meaning and value of Atget\'s photo-works are still being covered by those kind of distrust.
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It is difficult to know what kind of interests is behind that doubtful situation.
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