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Hello there!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this matter. :)
I appreciate your efforts and continue to strive for the better! :)
I am still hoping for you to answer the previous homeworks.
Take care.:)
T. Jeny ^^
Nonetheless, it would be an UN-doubtful conclusion in this thesis that distrusts satisfying the artifices which are from the idea adopting itself as the art critic and emphasizing the aesthetic meaning without even making any effort, know that its critical objects are revoked and criticized.
>>Correct!^^
This thesis intends to make clear those distrusts and to find out the meaning and value of Antget\'s photography.
>>OR:This thesis intends to make clear understanding with those distrusts and to find out the meaning and value of Antget\'s photography.
And, the process is going to be developed by supporting the points of view of Szakowski, Maria Morris, Molly Nesbit and Walter Benjamin.
>>Correct!^^
These people are emphasizing these followings: ambiguity, evolving form, under-laboring image, and practical art-works for politics which are the characterizing forms of Atget\'s photography.
>>These people are emphasizing the following:ambiguity, evolving form, under-laboring image, and practical art-works for politics which are characterizing forms of Atget\'s photography.
And, to re-evaluate Atget in the history of photography would be possible from the stage considering those meanings.
>>**It\'s okay if you are going to omit \"And\"
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