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Theme: [ESSAY] Give 3 major reasons why the number of confirmed cases in Korea has been steadily increasing these days.
1. People go out a lot.
People go out a lot these days.
I think it is main reason that why the number of Covid-19 confirmed cases is increasing in Korea.
2. Some people don\'t wear masks.
3. Stores are opened so people go out a lot to buy daily necessaries.
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Theme: [ESSAY] Give 3 major reasons why the number of confirmed cases in Korea has been steadily increasing these days.
Here are three reasons why Korea has more COVID-19 patients nowadays:
1. People go out a lot.
People go out a lot these days.
>> correct
>> or: People often go out nowadays.
I think it is main reason that why the number of Covid-19 confirmed cases is increasing in Korea.
>> I think it is the main reason why the number of Covid-19 confirmed cases is increasing in Korea.
2. Some people don\'t wear masks.
>> correct
3. Stores are opened so people go out a lot to buy daily necessaries.
>> Stores or shops are open so people go out a lot to buy daily necessities.
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