Reason for study hard
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Hi, A-Rim! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. Well done! I am sure that if you keep that saying in mind, you will achieve many great things in life.
~ Teacher Marie
Title: Reason for study hard
>> Title: Reason to study hard
OR: Title: Reason for studying hard
Manu students and I try to study hard but I haven’t think about ‘why are we study hard?’.
>> Many students like me try to study hard but I haven\'t thought about why we study hard.
However, It’s very simple I think.
>> However, I think it\'s very simple.
We are student.
>> We are students.
As many adults do their work hard for their jobs, We must study hard because we are student.
>> As many adults work hard for their jobs, we must study hard because we are students.
I heard that ‘Do your best what you do anything.’
>> I\'ve heard the saying, \"Do your best in everything you do.\"
I think it’s mean is try hard in your position.
>> I think it means to try hard in whatever position or role you have.
I will think about it anytime and anywhere.
>> CORRECT.
OR: I will keep it in mind whenever and wherever I am.
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