Reason to apply for AMK-2

2017-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

I will join Applied Materials Korea and will become a Process Support Engineer who can provide the technology that the customer wants accurately and quickly -Except what you describe as above, provide your competencies, strengths and weakness, extra activities you didn’t comment? [Weakness: Simple] Once you set up a goal, I will simply go towards my goal. In this process, when I pay attention to small parts, I may miss the schedule or not see the big part. [Strengths: Focused] To make up for these weakness, I make a note called 'self-checking list'. when I get to the goal, it schedules and records even the trivial content. I have been able to focus on the goals while checking the details and weekly schedules and periodically checking the final goals and situation. If I miss mistake. I made crosschecking with my colleagues. This effort has resulted in a change in my weak points of simple to strength.

강사 첨삭

I will join Applied Materials Korea and will become a Process Support Engineer who can provide the technology that the customer wants accurately and quickly.

I will join Applied Materials Korea and will become a Process Support Engineer who can provide the technology that the customer wants accurately and quickly.

[Weakness: Simple]

[Weakness: Being Simple]

I consider this as my weakness, once a goal/task has been set up for me. I tend to focus on that particular task only. During the process, when I pay attention to small parts, I may miss the biggest part or the main issue/problem.

[Strengths: Focused]

To make up for these weakness, I make a note called \'self-checking list\'. when I get to the goal, it schedules and records even the trivial content. I have been able to focus on the goals while checking the details and weekly schedules and periodically checking the final goals and situation. If I miss mistake. I made crosschecking with my colleagues. This effort has resulted in a change in my weak points of simple to strength.

To make up my weak point, I created a note called \'Self-Checking list.\' When I must do something, it schedules and records even the trivial content. I have been able to focus on my goals while checking the details and weekly schedule periodically. This system results to a big change of my weakest point.

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