reasons
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowdays there are decreasing rapidly the number of job numbers in Korea.
The time came to quickly earlier than we expect.
AI substitute person\'s workplace because it is cheap, efficient and without labot unions.
There are diminishing gradually the meaning and existence for human .
I wonder what we live for ?
If we go to like this speed, we will become a slave to technology and strong AI groups.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you! You have a very good point, and I think it would be an alarming situation for every industry or sector.
Aki~
Nowdays there are decreasing rapidly the number of job numbers in Korea.
>>> Nowadays there is a rapid decres of job orders in Korea.
The time came to quickly earlier than we expect.
>>> The time came to leave earlier than we expected.
AI substitute person\'s workplace because it is cheap, efficient and without labot unions.
>>> AI substitute person\'s workplace because it is cheap, efficient, and without labor unions.
There are diminishing gradually the meaning and existence for human .
>>> They are diminishing the meaning and existence of humans gradually.
>>> The meaning and existence of humans is gradually diminishing.
I wonder what we live for?
>> I wonder, what are we living for?
If we go to like this speed, we will become a slave to technology and strong AI groups.
>>> If we go at this speed, we will become slaves to technology and strong AI groups.
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