Reasons for students' academic failure in college

2013-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Talking about the cases in Korea, I would like to point out a few factors that cause college students to fail in the academic achievement. First of all, students tend to choose college over major because which college they enter and graduate from is highly regarded and it is of critical importance for their entire life. Their career path like promotion is largely influenced by their academic background, especially college they graduate from. Students just want to enter the first class college regardless of major they are interested in so they might simply give up when they lose their interest in the subject they study. The second reason is that they might have found something interesting that they like to be immersed in other than studying. Many famous celebrities were dropped out of college due to the reason. Thirdly, financial difficulties could make them suspend their studying due to high tuition cost or take away their studying time because they have to do part time works.

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Good evening Sir [이름]! Thank you for sharing this.^^ Some students also in the Philippines need to work while studying because of financial problems. It is really important for these students to finish their studies but they don\'t have a choice. I am really interested in this topic, tell me more about this later in class. ^^ Have a great day! Teacher Nina   Talking about the cases in Korea, I would like to point out a few factors that cause college students to fail in the academic achievement. >> Correct! >> OR: Talking about the cases in Korea, I would like to point out a few factors that cause college students to fail in their academic subjects.  First of all, students tend to choose college over major because which college they enter and graduate from is highly regarded and it is of critical importance for their entire life. >> Did you mean: First fo all, students tend to choose the school over their major because in which college they enter and graduate from is highly regarded and it is of critical importance to their life. >> OR: First of all, students tend to choose the college over their major. It is because the college which they enter and graduate from is highly regarded and it is of critical importance to their entire life. Their career path like promotion is largely influenced by their academic background, especially college they graduate from. >> Their career path like promotion is largely influenced by their academic background especially the college where they graduated. >> OR: The student\'s career path  like promotion is largely influenced by their academic background especially the school where they graduated. Students just want to enter the first class college regardless of major they are interested in so they might simply give up when they lose their interest in the subject they study. >> Students want to enter a first class college regardless of the major they are interested in. So they might simply give up when they lose their interest in the subject they are studying. >> OR: Students want to enter a preticious college regardless of the major they are interested in. So they might simply give up when they lose their interest in the subhect they are studying. The second reason is that they might have found something interesting that they like to be immersed in other than studying. >> Did you mean: The second reason is that they might have found something more interesting that they like to be immersed in, other than studying. Many famous celebrities were dropped out of college due to the reason. >> Many famous celebrities were dropped out of college due to this reason. Thirdly, financial difficulties could make them suspend their studying due to high tuition cost or take away their studying time because they have to do part time works. >> Did you mean: Thirdly, financial difficulties could make them suspend their studies due to high tuition fee or take away some of their time from studying because they have to do part time jobs. >> OR: Thirdly, financial difficulties could make them suspend their studies due to high tuition fee or their part time jobs take much of their time from studying their lessons.

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